Showdown in Black Oak Village update

Good news everyone! I have not one, but two more chapters done (Chapter 16 and 17). I’m going to keep all of the chapters in one place from now on:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BEVynP68iqSHcob-0owhFF6RDllxJCQTe2pKAgvLjuU/edit?usp=sharing

 

 

What do you think? Right? Wrong? Pure poppycock?